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Review:Alopex says:
Happy HPFFSAD!

I've never read a Charlie-in-Romania story that was anything like this first scene implies! I've never been to Romania either, so I can't speak for the accuracy, but the details you included really made the scene seem alive and realistic. I could picture it easily, it felt real, and there was a definite atmosphere that's different than most HP fanfiction (in which Hogwarts, obviously, is the major "atmosphere").

I liked the occasional Romanian phrases you included. Obviously, I don't speak Romanian, but the phrases definitely contributed to the story's overall atmosphere.

I like the way you started out focusing on the Death Eaters (or so I assume based on the Dark Mark) and then transitioned into more general observations as they watched the village, and finally slipped into Charlie's point of view. Well, I suppose it would be more accurate to say that the narrator's attention gradually moved from one thing to another.

The entire chapter flowed well, actually. The sequence of events was logical and fluid, not to mention engaging. What a good beginning to a story. :-)

Author's Response: You all have outdone yourselves with SAD. This is truly a great gift. Thank you for taking the time to leave a review, and in particular commenting on the POV. I wasn't at all confident about that choice. Thank you again for your SAD participation. I'm really touched.

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