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Review:Alopex says:
Happy HPFFSAD!

I hadn't realized it until now, but there really are a lot of similarities between Remus refusing Tonks and Harry dumping Ginny. I suppose it's not that surprising, as entire books have been written around that theme. Anyway, I really like that you drew the two situations together in such a way that the older ones could give the younger ones some advice and encouragement.

The flow of the story was good. Ginny started off alone and ended alone too, in both cases watching Harry, which brought the story around full circle, so to speak. You had the clumsy Tonks moment, which served as an excuse for the conversation anyway. Tonks seemed in character, with her jokes, but she was the perfect mix of seriousness and light-heartedness. Nice story.

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