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Review:Steph. says:
Oh my, how embarrasing. xD

I really loved this. I thought Minnie was the PERFECT Longbottom daughter, without being an exact replica of Neville. She's a hardworker, though she's more magically able than her father. She's shy and quiet, too. And, although squirrels are often overlooked, I think it really suits her.

I love how the Transfiguration teacher described her as a squirrel, and then it turns out her animagus is one, too. And even though she thought it'd suck, it worked to her advantage. I love how you described the animagus transformation, and you didn't just say "Her animagus is a squirrel!" but you let us see how confused she was, and how she figured out what she was gradually.

Excellent. Loved it.
10/10 (:

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really enjoyed writing Minnie, because she does have the streak of awkwardness coming from Neville. I am really glad that you enjoyed this story. It was just much fun to write something silly, and I'm glad I gave you a laugh! :)

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