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Review:macerinut says:
First of all, I'm reviewing as I read so I don't miss out on anything and forget to add something in ;)

I love that this is Harry/Luna, because they are so sweet together, and it's sort of reminding me of your Never Again! series but one where Lily had a brighter future.

Which brings me to Amanda. Love her! She's so funny, exactly as I'd have pictured a kid from Lily and Severus. And I also love how Harry honours both his dads by having both their names and allowing his daughter to do the same. I find that very cool and heart warming.

Rina- I love her name! Severina, it's so beautiful and I think you used it in another story- once again the Never Again! series where a grateful couple named their firstborn daughter that. She sounds so cute and so like Luna, though not quite as dreamy. And calling her imp is so sweet.

And her temper tantrum with Harry, oh my. Wow, lol, I could so picture Severus punishing Harry like that when he was small and going through the same things. And setting the curtains on fire! Very cool although naughty but still very cool and it's nice to see that Luna is hard on her too when she needs to be.

That flying bit was priceless! Standing on her broom and then Harry's reaction, lol... That was awesome!

The ending was so sweet too! Luna being pregnant again and Harry saying the same thing, lol. And you left it up to the imagination about who Hermione and Draco married *cough* each other *cough* lol.

This was an amazing songfic. Beautiful story, beautiful song and beautifully well written. The characters were in character and yet more so with your own special twist on them, making them seem more real and more human. I absolutely loved it and you are a fantastic writer!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I had a lot of fun writing this. It started as an idea that kept spinning around and around in my head until I just had to write it down. I loved writing about a grown up Harry and Luna and Sev as a grandpa was just too cool.

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