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Review:Jellyman says:
Oh, I am very interested as to what happens next!

Okay, I'll talk about the three leads for my last review until the update (which I will read, because I like this story :D):
Holden: I like Holden, but I have a feeling he is biting off a bit more than he can chew with being friends with Alyssa. As a character he is very solid - you write him very consistently, which is great. I like that he gets angry, but he's nice as well. But no unreasonably so :)
Lauren: I lovelovelove Lauren. Her insecurities are so realistic! She's lovely and sweet and charming and - ugh, I'll stop before I get too into it.
Alyssa: as I said in my last review, I think she is the most interesting. She's very double sided - I'm not sure whether she is hell-bent on breaking them up or not. We'll have to see.

Anyway, brilliant work so far! I love it and am looking forward to the update :)

Author's Response: Yes, I quite enjoy writing Holden too. I think I've actually from my niche at writing male characters well, though I'm still not completely confident at times because guys are complicated. But I pretty much have mastered just how I want Holden to be characterized and can write him and his actions as well as ever I try my hardest. I'm glad that his character is consistent, that's always wonderful to hear.

As for Lauren, like I already said, she's the easiest for me to write because she's somewhat based on me. I'm kind of insecure when it comes to some things and I can totally see how she might feel threatened of someone stealing away Holden. Any girl would feel the same way, actually.

Yes, Alyssa is by far the most difficult for me to write, no matter how well I have her character down pat to a T. She's two-faced, one thing she wants Holden and another she hates him. Her actions could really go either way depending on how she's feeling and it sometimes confuses me when I'm thinking of what to write as her next move. But I still like writing her because she challenges me to write her character well.

Thank you so much for reviewing, Georgia! I really appreciate all of the feedback and constructive criticism!

xox, Leslie


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