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Review:Jellyman says:
And he was dreaming, but of which girl?
I loved this as a closing line ^_^

I actually thought this was your strongest chapter so far! I'm loving the character development of Alyssa, Lauren and Holden - they're pretty intriguing characters! You're writing has improved considerably too since the first chapter! Great work :)

Author's Response: Heh, thanks. I like closing lines like that. It leaves he reader coming back for more, not to mention imagining all kinds of things that could happen. And thanks so much! I'm so happy to hear that you can see an improvement because I feel like I've improved since I started writing this story. -huggles-

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