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Review:Jellyman says:
I just adore Lauren's insecurities! Sounds mean, but it's true ;) I'm also totally concerned about this mystery girl - I'm all for Lauren/Holden, personally.

Okay, as for my critique for the last bit, I've noticed it's not very consistent so never mind. Most of the dialogue is very good, the formality is very rare - sorry for jumping to conclusions!

Author's Response: Ooh, I'm so glad to hear that my dialogue is mostly good rather than formal. It is my rough spot when it comes to writing and I'm working on improving it. Especially since it's so very important to move the story along with character interactions and such.

As for Lauren's insecurities, well I kind of characterized her a bit like me and that's why I can relate to her so much when I'm writing her. Thanks so much for reviewing and all the feedback so far!


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