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Review:Miss Lily Potter says:
Hey. Here from the forums with your review.

Wow. I really, honestly enjoyed this. (: It was sweet and heartwarming.

However, I do think that there was too much description. I like action, more then description, so I'm partial to like that better, but I have to admit, sometimes it was a bit tough to read, as it was SO full of detail.

That aside, I liked it. (: I love romance, and this was the perfect romance for me. It had an unpredictability that I haven't seen much, what with Lys leaving and such. The ending was a bit cliche, yes, but with romance, what isn't?

I love Dom, she was so sweet and a believable character to read, not to mention enjoyable to 'listen' to. So good job on that. :D

I really enjoyed it. (: Feel free to request for another story. (And sorry this review is so short, I'm a bit rushed for time.)


Author's Response: First of all, thank you for the review. I needed the feedback!
I do understand that there is too much detail. I know that when I write I tend to over-flourish, and that's just a habit I need to overcome. So thank you for mentioning it. I'm going to look over the story and see what I can change to simplify the descriptions a bit.
Thanks again so much for the review! I'm glad you liked the story :)

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