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Review:Jellyman says:
I know I said I would review every second one, but I had to make a note that the dialogue in this chapter was exactly what I meant in the first review! Well done, it really picked up the pace of the chapter :) The case in point was the discussion between Holden, Fred and James about the Masquerade Girl - nice work!

Author's Response: Yay! I'm so happy to hear that my dialogue as improved since the first chapter. Thanks so much!

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