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Review:C_R_Tulssri says:
Okay so:
I have been saving my review for a good ways in and here is my general report:
I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE your plot! Raine is a fun, easily accessable character and you've developed her well. Some parts, like the constant break ups, make ups and screw ups are a little redundant, but mostly good.
Now, storywise, I have only a few complaints.
The "-sex scene-" bits are irritating; you can skip a sex scene just by making an allusion and then trailing off.
Also; the flipping back and forth between Raine and Orenda is a little confusing.
Finally, you seem to end almost every chapter with someone falling asleep. This gets really old, really fast. For example in this chapter, you could end it with Lily's "Whatever."
My final note is that you, my fabulous author, need a beta (editor, etc.). You miss letters in words and your grammar needs some help. I would love to go through your work and just change the grammatical errors if you wouldn't mind.
Once again, I LOVE your writing!
Thanks for being brilliant!
C_R

Author's Response: If you want to be my beta i'm good with that, I haven't looked over the story in about a year, because the entire thing is done so if you'd like to let me know and I can send you the story and you can read over it and fix pieces for me, and I do believe most of the sex scenes have been cut down a lot, because I found them annoying when I would read over it.

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