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Review:Jellyman says:
Hi again! So I think a review every second chapter would be better, seeing as I would run out of things to talk about otherwise :)

So the last two chapters have been good! I like the reunion between James and Marisol, and the Cinderella-esque girl at the Masquerade was wonderfully written!

My one problem with the last two chapters would be the voices of the male leads. They seem to be very eager to lay their emotions on a sliver platter for all to see - in my experience, I find guys to be much more frustrating when it comes to their emotions. It's not a major problem, just something I have noticed in these three chapters :)

Otherwise, great work! I really, really want to know who this girl is!

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm still working on finding my male voice... it's somewhere up in my head buried beneath all the frilly pink tutus and girly things. But I will continue to work on it. And I'm glad that you enjoyed ch. 2 & 3 overall. Thanks again for reviewing!

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