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Review:Jellyman says:
Argh, you just about broke my heart.

James is so completely depressing - you've really grasped the depth of his disappointment. Quidditch was his entire life - there are no ifs or buts, that is how it is. Unfortunately, I'm going to have to demand some happiness in his life. He's going to make me cry soon - and that twit Hoskins can shove it. If he was real, I would totally send him hate mail.

And Fred...hmm, it's weird not to be inside his head while reading about him! But he is much more sombre in this, which was expected. Seeing him through James' completely forlorn head was interesting.

Amazing writing, Mel. I am so impressed by this story - it's not over the top in anyway, it's not overly descriptive; it's completely relatable, completely realistic. I love it.

Author's Response: Thank you, Georgia! This review really made me happy, because I'm so uncertain of myself when it comes to angst like this, and I'm constantly trying to figure out whether I've gone overboard yet. :-P

Everyone should send Hoskins hate mail. I wish I had an address for him.

I really liked showing a different side of Fred here - I mean, it's still Fred as we know him from TMW, but in a different situation that brings out more of his character.

Thanks again, Georgia! I really love hearing from you!

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