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Review:Paloma Patil says:
I really like the beginning of this. I particularly appreciate that you haven't revealed too much too soon, so that there are plenty of reasons to read on.

That's what I'm going to do right now.


Author's Response: Ooh yay! I always fear I'm moving too quickly, simply because I hate exposition. In original stories I write, I usually always skip the expostion and jump straight to the initial incident and things pick up as I go. I tried very hard not to do that in this story. So your comment was especially helpful.

Thank you so, so much. I'm glad you're enjoying it.

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