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Review:ladymblack says:
I think you've got a high enough rating on your fic to not worry too much about too much intimacy. I found it perfect, myself. Also, there is no need to apologize for a chapter like this. Not all of them have to have action, action, action. To me, a good 19 years story has a good balance of both. There is so much raw emotion and pain to deal with that you can't really slide over it. Those that have done so have clearly missed the point, in my opinion. They're not being realistic enough in the telling of their stories. So kudos to you for keeping true to "what must have happened" during the interim. Besides, I personally enjoy how they deal with the emotions and felt that you caught the banter very well. One could see the change in Ron after Malfoy Manor. Some people try to make him out to be as emotionally shallow as he had been before and I just don't see it or agree with it.

Sorry for waiting so long to review. I think I started reading this way back in the day, but lost track when updates weren't as frequent as some others. I'm glad I've found it again though as I enjoy your writing style. Now I know how to properly bookmark stories and will be able to check for updates.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you found the story again. I love your work so getting reviews from you is splendid! Thank you for your thoughts on this chapter. I whole heartedly agree with you about not being able to slide over all the emotion and pain that I think the characters must have felt during this time in their lives. It just wouldn't be realistic. I think at the time I was writing the first few chapters, I wasn't yet confident in what people wanted from a "19 years in between" story. But, now that I have been at this for over a year I've decided I need to tell the story the way that feels right to me and not worry so much about pleasing everyone else. Not that I don't want people to like the story! It's just more important for me to tell it like I think it really happened.
Thanks again for your wonderful review!


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