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Review:AndrinaBlack says:
It's so different from Steph's story, but still has the same scene kind of (unless I missed some point and this was actually a missing moment). You really made it your own though. :) And I love both stories!

Wow! That was thoughtless of Dumbledore! You really aren't that nice to him here.

I love it how Lily thinks of him as a man in love for a moment. It makes me think that he really is in love with her. Somehow I always want them to be really in love, and you keep kind of avoiding that, making it something... well a bit different. Maybe friendship plus passion. And still I love your stories, whatever you do with the characters. But I loved that little hint of love here.

And in the end it gets more definite. They definitely both love each other but haven't been able to tell it. *squeels* You got some fluffy romance in there! :P

I love Sirius' protectiveness of Lily and how they interact. You make them have this tension all the time, which sometimes makes them argue and sometimes makes them passionate towards each other. Though the arguing often comes from the protectiveness and all that too.

I love the atmosphere in this story too. I think that's something you and Steph have similar. You both have a clear sense of the atmosphere and surroudnings in the story. At least I had a feel of the starry night.

Oh and the end was great! "Colse enough to touch" and then the last lines. :) Wonderful story once again!

Author's Response: Yes, yes, I managed a bit of fluff. Sort of :P Thanks for pointing out about the tension between them, I try really hard to make sure it stays there even in the quieter moments. Doesn't always work but I'm glad I managed to here because that was definitely my intent. I wasn't sure about the ending so I'm glad you enjoyed it and it came off well.

Thanks for the review. I know you stayed up past your bedtime to read it and I really appreciate your willingness to do that. Although, one day we WILL get you to be on time around here :P


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