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Review:Steph says:
I think it fits into canon perfectly. After all, in the book, it sounded as if they'd had that conversation before; so yes, it fits perfectly. I love the way you included the quote at the beginning, it helps everything fall into place.

Wonderfully written. You kept both of them in character throughout, which can be pretty hard with fics like these. You portrayed her desperation magnificently, and his hesitance, too.
Fantastic job.
10/10

Author's Response: Thank you very much, Steph! Wow, I'm so glad that this story fits into the canon - it started out doing so, and then as I kept writing, I thought it was tumbling out of canon more and more. :P (which is why I ended up including the quote, to ground things a little firmer in place)

It's wonderful that you've enjoyed reading this, and I really appreciate that you took the time to review. ^_^


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