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Review:timeturner says:
Lovely descriptions at the start. You paint a rather grim picture just with the landscaping and that's quite a talent. You've given Snape some strong emotions here and managed to balance them well without making it melodramatic. Even though angry, I like that you make Lily give him one more chance...she attempts to get him on her side even at the end and that's very true to her character. I adore how he blamed James equally for her death. That's a nice touch that I haven't seen done with finesse in fanfic before so kudos to you for that. Nice story, a must for any Snape fan.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, timeturner. I'm glad you think it wasn't melodramatic, because personally I did think it was a tad bit sentimental. Then again, I'm so utterly unemotional that I have a hard time writing emotions and such.

It did seem obvious to me that he'd blame James for her death. I mean, he decidedly hates James, but for James to bequeath the animosity to Harry, and moreover for Snape to be so unrelenting in his hatred, I felt the loathing should be a bit more deep-seated.

Thanks very much for reviewing.

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