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Review:Illuminate says:
:D This is wonderful, very wonderful. A lovely idea.

I think your prose is spot on- I've gone through something similar to this and I think you've got Dominique's feelings perfectly.

I dont know if you are continuing this, but I think if you don't then it's perfectly alright.

Anyway, well done, 10/10 :)

Author's Response: Ahh thank you so very much! :) I'm so glad you think it's a good idea, I was so torn about writing it with the entire Teddy/Dominique/Victoire triangle cliche - but meh! I loved it too much to stay away.

Oh that's good to hear! That I've got her feelings correct, that is. That was tricky to write, her trying to be happy for her sister, desperately upset with Ted, guilty and heartbroken all at once. xD I'm really happy that it turned out okay!

In fact, I am continuing this! There's going to be a series of vignettes with Victoire and Dominique alternating narration. Second chapter is in the queue as I write this.

Loads of thanks, I do appreciate your review so much. :)

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