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Review:rdgale2000 says:
While it appears that English may be your second language, or you are very young, I must admit that your story is quite good. It is not as predictable as some HONK (Harry/Tonks) stories that I have read, and in fact shows some very original thought in the plot and pacing.

I have noticed you have not updated for a while. I hope you haven't gotten depressed over what any of the other reviews have said. The one thing that I try to remember is that this is YOUR fan fiction, and that you have decided to share it with us. We as readers should be grateful for that privilege, and if anyone complains about the spelling, grammar, or style, they shouldn't feel obligated to read the story. There are hundreds of thousands of Harry Potter stories for them to read, and if they can't find one that they like, they are welcome to try and write one and see just how much work it takes.

I hope you do continue the story. I would like to find out what Harry and Tonks have, but then I'm a twin, born on my fathers birthday (two boys), and my youngest son is also born on my birthday.

Now it's too late for the babies to be born on Harry's birthday, but I really think he would be happier with a little boy (first born), and then a cute little girl to spoil and protect.

I wish you well in your writing.

rdgale

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