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Review:miss_aurora says:
To be honest, I couldn't really choose which is better between Dom's and Teddy's, because I find both intriguing in their own way, but I guess I still love Dom's a tad bit more than Teddy's. Probably it's because I'm a girl as well, so I can relate it better with her, or simply because I find it more intriguing, well I couldn't be sure of that yet...

I find it real amusing that Teddy, who had proclaimed his love to Vic clearly, even Dom knows it, compared/related many things to Dom instead of Vic. Lol, I have two assumption about that, though eventually both leads to the fact that he has possibly harboured a romantic feeling to the younger Delacour.

Oh, and I think you make more spelling mistakes this time.

In any case, thank you for the update! :)

Author's Response: I can't choose either, (as I was thinking the same thing.) I might like Dom a bit more because she's a complete badass and doesn't take anything from anyone. Though writing for a guy's POV, especially one like Teddy, is really refreshing seeing as my other stories are all from a girl's POV almost all the time.

Yes, he does think of Dom often, as he considers her a best friend of love/hate and we all think of our best friends a lot...or is it more? ;)

I most likely did make more spelling mistakes. I am horribly guilty of not reading this chapter over. *blushes* Though I am trying to a find a beta so hopefully something comes up soon!

I'll be focusing on this story and one other for the next month so updates will be as quick!

Thanks for reading&reviewing!

becca xx


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