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Review:shadowycorner says:
Astoria has lost her mind. That's what I think. She succumbed to the isolation and accepted the clear, hopeless facts of dying locked up and forgotten, protected from the outside world. The way her mind goes is calm, almost feels collected and alright, but it's like the silence after a huge destructive thunderstorm or a hurricane. Therefore I feel she's gone through hell and back in her mind, she's mad, and this is only the silent numb resignation. It made me sad and hollow, but the ending made it up for me. Is there only one chapter left? Still not written, let me note, even though it's October and not August, heh?

All the parts with Astoria in the tower were brilliant, but this one was best. With the mirror and the cavity and seeing the bones of her father, and then Draco in the mirror...

The ending felt...ooh, I can't think of the bloody word, but the beginning of the end? Like at the end of a story when something small happens and you just know something big is going to happen onward, sealing the fates of everybody? That's what it felt like, AND it was the first time Astoria has spoken. Which is an achievement itself, bringing a character so close to the reader without having her speak for once before. And it also increased the power of the moment.

Daphne is...how do I put this? I think her parts were written extremely well. I wasn't as much scared as fascinated by the way you portrayed her madness. The way she danced and sang was terrible and gorgeous, but hauntingly so. I don't know why. It was such a strong moment, so epic, like when Cathy went mad in Wuthering Heights. And I swear I just waited for her to fall of a cliff while dancing and spinning, but then there was the blood, tainted and brighter as Draco noticed, so maybe I'm not completely off the track. I want to know what happened and how this will end, so...Gubby...update? Please? Because now that I've gotten so absorbed in this, it's like standing above an empty space with nothing more to read.

I love this. You're incredible and I'm happy I finally read this.

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