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Review:shadowycorner says:
That last line stunned me completely. So genius and bitterly significant. I would never thought of this. So simple and meaning so damn much. You're a real inspiration.

This must be my favorite chapter so far. The beginning was great, finally bringing in Astoria, and a madness of her own. It's just horrible, being locked and isolated from the entire world, forgotten and buried in the minds of others. The way she lives in the tower is haunting and Astoria's character is fleshing out so vividly as I read. She wants to defy her mother's madness, but she's losing it, too. Who wouldn't, though? You can really see that when she starts digging into the walls with her own fingers, lost for what else to do. I would die, and I mean that I felt my insides swirl and clutch just by reading. You're so good at scaring people and making them feel the hopelessness, anger and terror the characters feel. I always need a moment to recover after I read your stories. There's the scent of her mother still in the tower, her cold diary entries, the mysterious cave...reading this is a real treat. I hope someone (Draco) finds her real soon before she starts banging her head against the wall or something.

The beginning was so good, bringing back the couple from the first chapter and bringing the whole issue of the mad woman and the tower through the eyes of an outsider. And the ending just left me wanting more.

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