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Review:shadowycorner says:
What a smooth change of narrative. A nice transition, really. We're back in the real world. I felt all lovely, like reading Harry Potter again, because you just capture the magic and point of it. Some authors write fanfiction that it doesn't feel like HP fanfiction at all, which is a good thing, of course, but I love when there's a story that has the same air of intrigue and darkness and magic. Add your unique writing style to it, and I just want to print this out, bind it in a pretty cover, curl in my blanket and read it by the rainwashed window, sipping tea.

I love post-war Draco. He's so interesting, because there's so much to deal with, like his job, his attitude and the way the rest of the Wizarding society treats him. I really liked your version of him. There was a nice touch with Draco thinking about his father breathing down his neck, and then when you showed that he really is...not a Malfoy through and through anymore, declining the money.

Daphne's entrance was brilliant, stirring something up in Draco. She had this mysterious air, not revealing everything, and I don't trust her, but she felt like such a vital character in your version so I hope I see more of her.

Tsk, tsk, Draco doesn't know where Prague is? What a shame!

Great chapter, superb dialogue, Draco was so fantastic and the writing combined with the whole idea is so creative and original.

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