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Review:Lily123Evans says:
Well then. Chapter Numero Dos. I though this was extremely well written... especially the description of the bedroom and such. I could really see it in my brain... I loved the bit oyu added with the house elf. That was really cute...a couple things I'm not really clear on: Is Hermione going to become the new Potions Master? And did Snape like her back... or was it just one way? I don't know if I missed those details or what. If I'm not being stupid, I would add that information in future chapters. The one other thing I had a problem with was dialogue. There needs to be more of it. The bit you have is REALLY good, but there needs to be more (otherwise, it's going to get old really soon). So yeah. That's it. Good job! 9 out of 10!

Author's Response: No, she is'nt. She volunteered to help as an excuse to use a private lab... And she does'nt have a thing for Severus, nor did he have a thing for her... that is something that will develop in the future, if she suceeds that is... ;) Yes, there will be dialouge, quite soon. Towards the end of chapter 3 it will start to get...interesting ;) *muhahahaha*

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