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Review:Amberfire says:
I was a bit like 'hmm' when you said that this story would only be like 5 or so chapters, I wasn't sure how well it would work out, and if you could fit enough in to make Teddy and Lily's relationship as deep as it was, but you did it so well!
At the beginning you had Lily as an innocent child with a crush on her mentor/best friend and I was a little concerned that what could be a brilliant story would go down the drain but it worked brilliantly!
You really developed the relationship and made it meaningful, so that it wasn't just another one of 'those' fics where the story line is fine, but everything happens so fast that you don't get to see the how and why.

It was good the way that you put in Teddy's feelings of like 'what the heck did I just do?!' I think if he just went for it straight away and didn't have second thoughts it wouldn't have been Teddy - if you know what I mean...
Really great story!!
10/10 without a doubt!
Love Amberfire

Author's Response: Thankyou so much, I'm so happy that you like the characters and the way that they've developed over the chapters. I thought that if I tried to write it all coming on over time my story would be plotless and about 20 words, so I'm glad you thought the five chapters still got it all.
Hope you read and like any other stories I post :D

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