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Review:Lily123Evans says:
Hmmm... I agree with you. It DID turn out very nicely! You captured his emotion in such a believably way... it was so sad!! I love the part you added about the biting of the nails. That was really cute! I would have specified more what time period it was and who "he" was. The he who died. I'm guessing it was Sirius... but that's just a wild guess. Besides that, this was amazingly well done. Such a short piece too... anywho, I loved it. 10 out of 10 and an A+++ for effort! YEAH! keep it up! :o)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! 'He' was actually Dumbledore, this takes place right after his death but I suppose the scene could have worked just as well for Sirius.

I'm really glad you enjoyed the read, 10/10, hot-dog I'll take it, thank yet again!

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