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Review:TheDirigiblePlum says:
A new chapter!

You really nailed James' despair in this, especially the bit at the end when he was doing the drills and tried to make himself feel good again, but came off looking worse.

"“You’re really pathetic,” he said quietly.

His reflection said the same thing."

I thought this last bit was really striking, because it shows that James knows what's happening to him, and maybe that will help him to recover again?? Yes?! Sorry I hate seeing him like this, and I hope things work out for him!! I still love this story though, because I really enjoy the character you've created out of James.

Another thing I like is the way that The Morning Waffle occassionally features in the story. It makes your stories link together and that seems to the increase the size of your section of the magical world! Just seeing all the characters living alongside each other and living different lives with different troubles makes it all very real, which I love :) I hope that made sense.

Is the next chapter coming up soon?! :D

10/10

Author's Response: Yes, yes, yes! I think you hit the nail on the head - James knows exactly what's going on, and he doesn't like it very much. He has a good head on his shoulders; it's just been temporarily knocked askew.

I really liked tying these two stories together, and it's given me the idea to eventually write a background story for each of the major characters in TMW - I like the idea of creating a whole Waffle universe. ^_^

Thank you so much for the review! I am terribly sorry it's taken me so long to respond!

Melanie


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