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Review:SnitchSnatcher says:
So, Jane, listen here, because I'm going to make this short and sweet. Are you ready? *clears throat*

This was AMAZING. I liked the chronology of it and the fact that you denoted the sections with Roman numerals. Being the slightly bizarre person that I am, I have a thing for Roman numerals. Aside from the sequence of the events, I loved the descriptions.

Holy pop culture reference, were they amazing. And they fit Luna to a tee. The one scene in particular that captured my attention both character-wise and description-wise was the swinging scene. I could see an adult Luna laughing joyfully to herself, completely oblivious to the stares of those around her. It seemed very Luna-ish, and I'm really glad that you included it.

So, yeah, maybe I lied when I said this was going to be short and sweet, but I'm a rambler and things happen.

IT WAS LOVELY, JANE! A BIZILLION OUT OF TEN.



Author's Response: I am ready and listening, but probably going to deny everything you say about Frozen Chips.

I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the chronology! It definitely had the potential for confusion, but hopefully it made a little bit of sense :P. Roman Numerals are cool, although I made a horrid mistake with them that Rachel had to stare at in disgust and then correct XD. I was ashamed.

Thank you very much -blushes-. I'm glad you thought so XD. I am not the most descriptive writer in the world (AT ALL), so it's great to hear that these were effective. I think the hardest part of this was trying to capture Luna, so I had to do it in a style where I could be detached, but still tell her story in a way that could get people a little emotional :P.

Rambling is cool. It is all sweet.

THANK YOU SO MUCH, YOU DELUSIONAL EEJIT! ILY!

xx


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