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Review:RonsGirlFriday says:
Ha! I would never have guessed someone would take this challenge and write a humor piece for it. How very droll! ^_^

I am assuming, because I know you're a very good writer and this was parody, that the choppiness and awkward working and other similar issues here were intentional. (If not, I've just gone and shoved my foot in my mouth.)

Gotta love Harry's recurring A secluded [blank]! Brilliant! Only one thing on his mind, I see. The whole thing was very farcical (and I love a good farce, so two thumbs up for that!)

All in all, this was a really unexpected, creative, fun read!

Melanie

Author's Response: The choppiness, awkward wording and other issues were indeed intentional. I knew I couldn't be too serious with this and it had to be a parody, otherwise I couldn't bear poisoning Luna.

Thanks for the very nice review. Every once in a while, I have to indulge my silly side with something like this.

Harry was being controlled a bit by the veela hormones, so it only makes sense that he'd have just one thing on his mind.

Glad you enjoyed it.


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