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Review:Snapegirl says:
I felt so bad for Lily that she lost the baby. Aww! And Emma was acting like a spoiled brat and deserved the spanking Sev gave her. I loved the part at the end where Harry and Emma talked. Such a sweet moment. Your writing is improving with each chapter.

And now I think would be the time for some father-daughter bonding, like I mentioned earlier. Maybe Emma could come out and hear her parents talking and hear Sev tell Lily he was sorry he lost his temper and spanked Emma when he was mad and then he might say something like "I'm afraid I'm a bad father, but her mood swings are just so quick it's hard for me to deal with them. It was different with Harry." And Lily laughs and says it's hormones and just wait till she was 13 and then she can say that she really misses not having another baby and Emma then realizes how selfish she was and thinks how they really do love her. Sev finds her in the hall, she runs to him and cries and he hugs her, they talk and then eat dinner.

Author's Response: Well, I've already wrote the next chapter. Its about she and Harry going back to school. Thanks for the idea though. The next chapter after the next one (the seventh one) Emma gets a boyfriend and you get to see Sev's reaction! You're the best reviewer ever!

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