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Review:WeasleyTwins says:
Melanie! I'm here to review for the challenge!

If I do say so myself, I believe that I gave you the perfect word. I didn't know what to expect, to be honest. At first I thought perhaps you would write about two lovers, but no, you did something better. Much better. I love that your stream of consciousness writing is random, yet perfect coherent and flows smoothly. The best paragraph, by far was the Guildencrantz and Rosenstern bit. At the end you talked about bacon...bacon! With that particular paragraph you give the reader something to ponder, to wonder why bacon, why not sausage?

I believe that you captured Fred and George perfectly, well George rather. This is a masterpiece, a one-shot full of emotion and love that bursts with each sentence. Overall, a great one-shot and one you should be very proud of!

10/10

Shelby

Author's Response: Hi Shelby!

I have to say this is one of the best, most rewarding (and most challenging!) challenges I've done yet. It was truly challenging for me because I like for things to be straightforward and coherent, and I like to do a lot of thinking before I write. So to just write without filtering, and then not go back and edit, was difficult for me, but also very liberating and mind-opening. I definitely plan to write in this style again in the future!

Why bacon, indeed. I shall leave you to ponder it. ^_^

I'm really flattered by your review, and I'm so glad you thought I did justice to the twins. It's interesting, your comment about what you thought I might do with the prompt, because when I started thinking about the word "moonbeam," it just seemed like it fit the twins. I can't explain it. But I am so happy to hear you found this so moving!

Thank you!

Melanie

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