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Review:George Whitman says:
I thought this story was alright but I got the impression that everyone was a bit too quirky. It kind of annoyed me throughout the story. Overall I couldn't decide whether you were trying to be serious or funny. I liked the concept enough but I can't imagine Mungo's would really be that bothered by a pregnant woman. It reminded me a lot of the delivery episode of the t.v. show Mad About You. I really did like the mannequin to open and end the story. It added a very unique touch.

Author's Response: I didn't know there was anything that could be called "too quirky"! Quirkiness is what keeps life interesting. :D

I definitely wasn't trying to be serious, hence the over reaction by St Mungo's when Hermione arrived. Lol I've never seen that show... is it American?

Thank you for your feedback on the mannequin though, I felt that added a nice touch to the story... if I may say so myself.

Again, thank you for reviewing! I always like hearing peoples' opinions on my stories. :)

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