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Review:datbenik513 says:
So, my first question got answered. This is how Ron'd become what he'd become. That night during the hideout changed the life of all of them.

I'm positive you meant "hypothermia" instead of "hyperthermia". At least, you're most likely to get undercooled in cold rain that get overheated.

It was an electrifying moment between them and written very believably. Also, the following discussion of Hermione with herself was a nice element.

Good question. How long has she been loving him? I guess, for a long time. Maybe since first year.

Author's Response: I was so glad I had a nice little place to put that explanation. I was worried about how to bring it up without it seeming forced.

Yes I was unsure of which one to use so I guessed. Sh. Don't tell anyone. I'll fix that up shortly.

That Hermione conversation was one of the fun things about this fic. They kind of just flow out of nowhere. Most of this story has written itself. Makes things so much easier.

Can't really comment on this part just yet. More info coming soon I promise.


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