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Review:Violet Gryfindor says:
Even without seeing who you'd listed as the other characters, I'd guessed it was the Lestranges. Bellatrix emerged vividly from the descriptions without you even needing to name her - it's not just the strength of her character, but the way you wrote her, which made this possible. I really like the idea of a triangle between the three of them; thinking back to what Alecto was like, she really isn't that different from Bellatrix. They are like reflections of one another: dark witches with insatiable hunger for power and a love of evil. But Alecto was different in that she has also that loyalty to her brother - a strong bond that Bellatrix is unable to share, even with Narcissa.

But it's the writing in this story that really makes it special, even brilliant. I love your use of imagery and the darkness of the narrative voice. It's deeply psychological and it was absolutely fascinating to read. Once again, you've written something that's really blown me away.

Author's Response: you guessed it? really? omg wow! that means so much because i was terribly afraid that they wouldn't be recognisable! thank you susan!

alecto intrigues me. i did have another fic about her, set in her hogwarts years, but i could not move forward with it. i see her just as you do - she is so very similar to bellatrix.

thank you so much for your lovely words susan! i really appreciate it and im glad you liked it (and glad it made sense :P )

xx

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