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Review:Lily123Evans says:
Wow. Sevmione. That's a new one. Anywho... I thought this was very well written! I hate Severus Snape with a thousand burning fires but you actually had me feeling sorry for him! That's an acomplishment! The characterization of Hermione was EXTREMELY well done... she wasn't too weepy or too not or anything. I also really liked your descriptions... you did a great job getting us really into the scene. In the words of my ex-English teacher, Kudos! I believe the only thing I had a problem with was dialogue. I'm sooo picky about that, but I thought the conversation between Albus and Hermione was a tad too awkward. I would transition it better somehow and just make it less stiff (if you know what I mean). OH! One thing I really really loved was the emotion you showed. You didn't just focus on Snape, you showed everyone grieving. Mainly on Fred, but I love him to death so that's okay! :O) Anyways. Great story. Kep writing... 9/10!



Author's Response: Lol, no so new if your a fan of that ship... ;) You just have to know where to look for them ;)

I'm thrilled that I was able to turn that hate in to 'feeling sorry'... that is so awsome to hear lol.

Thank you so much for your compliments and your review! *HUGS*


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