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Review:Jackson Robles says:
That's good. Original I'd say, actually. So many times you see something catchy, something about the scenery--that's how mine starts. Not yours. "He's late." So much can come from that. Let's read on...

It's well written, but not necessarily my cup of tea. Angst isn't my style. While I am all for terrible people as narrators, believe me, this character, and from what I've read I could have predicted everything you wrote.

While I promise I mean that in the best of ways I will read on--and please don't take that the wrong way. It's a good original character, well rounded and feels real. So many OC's seem like mannequins.

Onto the next one. I was honest. I said I would be.

Author's Response: Thank you! I HATE starting stories with description. I hardly ever do it. I'm glad you like it. =)

I know that this story takes a certain kind of reader, and I know that asking anyone to review it is a huge risk. I'm a bit confused about your comment about my writing being predictable. In what ways? How did you know what I was going to write? Was it just Clyde that made everything obvious?

Thank you so much! I appreciate your honesty. =)

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