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Review:Radcliffe_PotterFan319 says:
Well, I must say I'm incredibly impressed. You have a wonderful writing style and it flows very, very well. The characters are all deep, even the ones you barely get to know. Each one is realistic and the story falls into our actual knowledge of the Marauders very well.

And thank you so much for not making Sirius know that he was never meant to be in Slytherin. I find it incredibly annoying when he's always been "different" and hated by his family. You wrote this very well. I always believed that Sirius would want to live up to his name before Hogwarts.

Fabulous job. I cannot wait to see what you do with this. :)

Author's Response: Hey! You used to read my stories when I wrote as Bibbs :D

Thank you for the compliments on writing style. I really enjoy how everyone write's a little differently (or a lot differently), and am quite pleased whenever somebody likes mine. Also, I am thrilled that you find even the minor characters to be deep!

I really hate the idea that Sirius has always been a rebel right off the bat, and I hate when people do it, and I hated that JKR had him suddenly abandon his entire life on the Hogwarts Express in Snape's memory. I can see Sirius being a trouble maker and having an eye for mischief (which could help him with his decisions), but at age 11, who could abandon their entire family and every belief he's been raised with? I think you and I see it the same :)

I don't want to lead you on with this, so I must warn you that this story is temporarily on hiatus. I really like what I have so far, and always wanted a novel of my own that went over these first few months with the Marauders, so I plan to finish. I just barely have time to update my main story right now, let alone this one :(

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