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Review:Lord Sophiemort says:
This piece really struck a chord with me.

The mutual 'father-hate' between Riddle and Crouch Jr. was something I had never picked up on before. You've really looked deep into Barty, opened him up. I'm just so desperately sorry for him! :(

It's a magnificent idea. The love-starvation turning him to evil... You've transformed him. He's so much more... real. Alive.

The relationship between him and his Mother was expressed brilliantly, too.

"You're beautiful, Mum," he whispers, and he refuses to let go, even when her chuckle has turned into a cough.

Such a sweet boy.

There isn't much else I can say, in all honesty, except that I completely adore this piece and I shall be addng it to my favourites right away.

It's perfect.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the compliments, it really means a lot to me! It's really good to hear that I managed to pull of Barty's personality and reasons for joining Voldemort. I was rereading through Goblet of Fire and that one line really stuck out at me - the one about him being closer to Voldemort than a son. And the fact that his father made an example of him, never once taking the time to wonder if his son was alright and such. I guess I blame Barty Crouch, Sr. for the way that his son turned out.

Again, thank you so much for leaving such wonderful compliments. This review really made my day :)

soliloquy.


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