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Review:charlie23 says:
You had me completely surprised by the "bad guy" being reynolds. I did not see that coming at all. Great twist. Loved the fact that Ron was the person who caught him too. I always like it when Ron plays a big role in doing things like that and when he gets the praise like in the Prophet for it.

I thought their second, first date was great. All the nervous energy and awkward silences. I'm with Hermione - I'd have probably said exactly what she said in that situation. Ron shouldn't have gone off on one, though he does tend to do that being over sensitive to things, but it was great that he went after her. He was so sweet when he tried to comfort her wiping away her tear. So lovely.

Oh, and I loved the way Hermione was acting at the beginning after reading the article, determined not to get over excited or get in touch with Ron first etc. Again, exactly what I would probably do, try and pretend like I wasn't desperate to see them etc.

Can't wait to see how their relationship develops from this point x

Author's Response: Yay, glad you were shocked. I love when Ron proves that he is not just a side kick :)
No, Ron shouldnt have been so snappy, but I think it is completely like him to speak without thinking ;) Besides, what kind of date would it be without a row?
Thanks so much as always.

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