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Review:theRandomSlytherin says:
Hey, hey, hey Deana!
*yawn* too lazy to log in.
I'm so bad. Lol, just kidding.
Anyways.
Your one-shot.
It's like, the epitome of awesomeness! Yeah,haha!
Well, I LOVE Saleena's character and her personality, and, oooh, I love this quote:

"I really wish this woman could understand the concept of personal space. I am not a hugger."

Lol. I think about that all the time when I meet distant relatives and stuff, hehe.

The way Carla was portrayed- old, selfish, senile-was just so realistic.
Overall, like I said, this was a really great one-shot, and Saleena is an awesome character.

"My name is Saleena Blackwell and, weather I like it or not, I was born to be a leader. I have spent the last 30 years of my life running away from my past, because I did not want it to become my future. But it seems that all is catching up with me now, as I find myself back in the last place on earth I ever wanted to be at... my home." (Okay, I think I'm overusing the word "love" here, but me love the summary! Eep! It's deep and descriptive and just.eep! Lol)

100/10, girl. 'Cause you deserve it.

Peace, Love, and Chocolate Frogs (yum, chocolate),
Michelle

Author's Response: Lol! Haha, you're funny girl!!
OMG, this review was great!! Thank you SO much!!
I'm glad you liked that quote, and I totally know what you mean... I actually JUST came home from a family reunion the other day, so, um yeah, haha! :)

I am so happy you liked the Summary! Deep is definitely what I was going for, cuz Saleena is certainly a character with a LOT of depth to her! She is very secretive, and secluded, and repressed when it comes to her past, and dealing with her feelings. The summary was actually the last thing that I wrote, and I was very pleased with it! At first, I seriously had NO idea of what I was going to put there, but then, that idea just kind of came to me! So I am really glad that you loved it!! =)

Thank you so much for being the 1st to review Michelle!! I am glad you like Saleena, and happy you enjoyed the one shot! Hopefully, my banner for this should be done here in a few days!!! I can't wait to see it!! (And, on a side note, the chapter of AiNFiL&W that I am writing right now -chapter17- will have a chapter image if Saleena's mom at the top of it!!) YAAAYY!!! ^_^


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