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Review:MajiKat says:
oh magnificent!! this was an excellent chapter Susan! as always, your writing was impeccable - i really love the narrative voice of both characters and i love it when POV switches from chapter to chapter. its a great way to make the reader more inclusive without having to write in 3rd person omniscient.

hermione and draco are very well written - im a big fan of post-hogwarts fics because i believe there is more space to work the characters however you wish, and you have done a wonderful job! they are both as they were in school, only older, more mature. the key traits are still present!

im loving what could possibly come of this new predicament!! can't wait to read the next chapter and sorry its taken so long to read this one!!

kate xx

Author's Response: Wow, Kate, it's so brilliant that you like this story! I feel awful for not being able to come up with a half-decent next chapter. It all feels so fake when I try, but I will try harder. ^_^

With the switching characters, I wanted to provide insight into both characters, as both of them have to go through significant changes/development within this story. It wouldn't have been "fair" to focus on one or the other, and not only would it have been difficult to choose just one of them, but it also may have made this story too run-of-the-mill (as I would have probably chosen Hermione, and then Draco would become the cliched villainous seducer :P). I'm glad that the narration I've chosen for the story works to include the reader and makes the story interesting. :D

Post-Hogwarts is more fun to write in, both because "canon" matters less, which widens one's horizons, and I enjoy the characters more as adults. They're not immature or teenager-ish, so I feel that I'm able to do more with them psychologically.

Thank you again for this wonderful review! It means so much to hear from you, and that you enjoy this story! ^_^

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