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Review:redherring says:
Wow. Seriously, that was amazing! Your writing was just beautiful - description, dialogue, everything - and I loved the whole only-a-child theme, because how young they all were is something that's often rather overlooked in fanfiction.

I also completely adored your characteristions. James in particular was absolutely spot on - you definitely did him justice. Probably the best portrayal of him I think I've ever seen, actually :D I loved him.

Something else I really loved is the way you structured it, with the numbered sections not in chronological order. It's something I've seen done only a couple of times before and I have to confess that I never really saw the point of it, but I think that you may actually have converted me with this! I thought it worked brilliantly.

Anyway, I REALLY enjoyed it :) My new favourite one-shot! 10/10.

Author's Response: Thank you, Lizzie!

I agree, their age is very often overlooked. I don't think people really think about what it means to deal with this stuff when you're about 20 years old. I think it makes the whole situation about a hundred times scarier.

I'm so glad you liked James' characterization! He's fun to write, though I think there are complexities to his character that people often overlook.

This is the first time I've ever written something out of chron. order, so I'm glad it worked here!

Thanks again for the great review! ^_^

Melanie


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