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Review:soliloquy says:
Argh, I'm supposed to be writing an essay but who needs essays when you've got this to read! Honestly, my heart ached at the end. I ached for James. I ached for Lily. I ached for Harry. I just ached. It was like, you built up all of this from the beginning, building up this tower of blocks until the very end when they all just come falling down.

I think you captured the fear, the unknown - extremely well. James was well-written. I think my favorite part was also the saddest part - when he actually picks Peter because he Peter is family and he trusts him...it just makes the betrayal hurt that much more.

The rationality of the entire situation is mind-boggling. You've captured it all..so well...everything. The dialogue, the thought process - everything is perfect. Everything you write is so addicting that I can't ever stop reading. Wonderful, wonderful job. It's an exceptional one-shot ♥

Author's Response: Thanks for the fantastic review! I'm happy to hear you were so moved by this!

The scene with Peter is one of my favorites, too. I was very sad while writing it.

Thanks once again!


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