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Review:Miss Lily Potter says:
I really enjoyed this. (: It was poetic, in a way, and while some lines, at first glance, would appear redundant, they weren't, at all.

I especially liked this line:
She would laugh her gentle laugh that reminded him of waves rolling, of the wind playing the trees.

That struck me as adorable, as did the rest of the fic. (: You have a real way with words, if you'll pardon the cliche. It was realistically written, and the brackets made it seem more so. Everyone dreams about love like that, and you've managed to capture it well. (:

The only thing I'd point out is that it's really not obvious that it takes place in the magical realm, though I actually enjoyed that part of it as well.(:

Very well done. !
-Jasmine

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

It's great to hear that you liked this odd little one-shot. Haha, everyone does dream about love like the one Teddy and Molly share, although it's not really a very perfect one, as shown by the ending.

It really isn't very connected to the magical realm, is it? It probably could simply stand on its own. None of my fanfiction leans too heavily on JK's world. I can't really explain why. I feel like writing something a little looser gives me more freedom. (:

Thanks for the wonderful review!

Celeste


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