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Review:elisalinguine_x says:
Hey it's elisalinguine_x from the forums!

It was a cute little one-shot. I like how you took a different aproach to the story rather than the whole Victoire-going-out-with-Teddy-but-Dom-fancies-him-so-Teddy-cheats-on-Victoire situation. You can pat yourself on the back for that :)

I didn't notice any grammar or spelling issues except when you close a speech quotation you should always have a comma before putting the said/replied/etc.

For example:
"Looks nice." I said

Should be:
"Looks nice," I said

Nothing a quick re-read can't fix :)

Keep up the good work!
8/10!
Elisa

Author's Response: Hey!

I'm glad you liked my one-shot; I also agree about the Dom/Ted/Vic approach to the story. That's one thing to avoid in writing this kind of ship.

I'll also remember to put a comma before the said when I close a speech quotation. That slipped off my mind.

Anyway, thanks for reviewing; I really appreciate it!! :)


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