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Review:ohcrapidroppedmybrain says:
woah. Why aren't there more reviews for this? It isn't even 2000 words yet it is so emotional I almost cried. You have a knack for writing detail, and the more emotional parts of a relationship, and I like that. I don't have to even know why they are fighting; I just know that it's real and full of that angst I enjoy =]]

Um...major deja vu here, but you wouldn't know why. Er...I was sort of typing out loud. Anyways, the glass was a great metaphor to represent their relationship; you also made it ironic by shattering the glass- which in turn sort of glued them together (in a way)

"I'm sorry," she breathed, capturing my hand with her own. "I'm so sorry."

I said nothing, but let whistles of air escape my lips to comfort her. "Sh..."

We sat there for what seemed like an eternity, water falling from her eyes and into my open palm as I tried to wipe them away. She wouldn't stop muttering, blubbering incoherent words through her tears as I tried to quiet her.

"I-I'm sorry."


That right there almost made me bawl my eyes out. You showed Victoire in a vulnerable state, and it wasn't like she was a mini Fleur at all. You portrayed her as being hurt by something that Teddy did, but definitely not stuck up. Thank you so much for doing that because I actually hate the stereotypical Victoire and you did away with it.

11/10 and I'm adding it to my favorites straight away!

Constants.

Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much! I'm sorry I didn't get to this review sooner. :) I was too flattered to come up with a response!

Still, I don't really know how to reply. Uh... thank you? I'm absolutely flattered/over the moon/grinning like a goose (if geese can grin...) at what you said. Really. It means a lot to me!

Thanks again,
Rin


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