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Review:Moonylupin says:
Wow, this was an awesome surprise! I never would have thought of a story describing how she would have felt about Remus's death. She obviously must have grown so close to him through his years at Hogwarts and, I know I've said it dozens of times, I love the way you develop Madam Pomfrey's relationship with students like Remus and Matt from your Albus Series.

The song fit perfectly with the story. It must have been horrifying, fighting for your own life and then to see someone you cared so much about lying dead. I loved the flashbacks, the way you showed how Remus changed from a shy boy to a confident man. The way he went to her when Sirius and Lily and James died, Madam Pomfrey must have been like Remus's mother. His confidant, basically. I never would have thought of Remus telling her that Peter was guilty and Sirius innocent. Another thing - the way Remus kept saying he should have been their Secret Keeper - I loved that bit. He would blame himself for something like that, thinking if he had been the Secret Keeper his friends would've been alive.

Poor Madam Pomfrey. I felt so horrible for her as she cried for Remus and Tonks. But I loved the way she went back into action, fighting off the Death Eaters that killed Remus. Excellent one-shot!

Author's Response: I never would have thought of it either, until WeasleyTwins reviewed my other Madam Pomfrey story and suggested it! I love writing about the relationships she develops with students in my stories.

It's such a sad song. I heard it shortly after WeasleyTwins gave me the idea for this and it just hit me that I should use it.

The flashbacks just sort of happened. I was originally just going to have Madam Pomfrey grieving, but then I realized that the flashbacks would fit well. I always thought he would confide in her a lot during his Hogwarts years, especially before the other Marauders found out he was a werewolf.

She had to get right back into the action. I can only imagine how hard it would be to see people you love killed and have to put it out of your mind while you kept fighting. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)


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