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Review:Laugharama_llama says:
Oh no!

Okay, so I absolutely loved this story, I really did!! But just because J.K.R. already wrote the ending (not that you didn't follow it, you did!) I wish that the V was them after death, you know? Like a bitter sweet ending instead of just a really really sad one? Because before that, it was kind of half happy half sad; bittersweet! But then I was close to tears and the end and I didn't want it to end like that.

It really was a brilliant story tho. But it would've been nice if you skipped the death scene and went to an after-life scene.

Okay, so I hope you didn't take that wrong!! I really did love it!!! Thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I get what you're saying about the sad death scene at the end, though I ended it that way for two reasons: 1) it fit with my vision for this piece, and the theme, and how James was feeling; and 2) I tend to write happy stuff, and I wanted to branch out a bit and do something sad, LOL.

Anyway, I appreciate your review, and I'm glad you enjoyed this story, even with the depressing ending. Thanks for all of the reviews you left me today -- they were fantastic!


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