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Review:laura lollypop says:
epic. brilliant. though lily seemed very dense some of the time she rejected him so much then the one time he said "i'll bear that in mind" instead of "go out with me evans" because he had a GIRLFRIEND and she had broken his heart she was allowed to be all sad and he had to put himself out there again for her. thats my only gripe though, absolutely loved the rest of it as i do all of your work. thankyou!!! xxx

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I know what you mean, when I read this story I laugh and cringe at the same time, the planning and writing is so bad. I think what I was going for with all the to-and-fro was that relationships rarely work out the way we want them to. So while Lily wanted him to just drop everything for her, he couldn't, and she didn't know what to do. At the end of the day though, it was worth putting himself out there again, I suppose. I'm not sure if that makes sense. Thanks for the review! Haha.

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