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Review:Joanne K says:
I really liked the beginning of this piece, the way you wrote Hermione's thoughts, it was very well done. I felt the first half was much stronger than the second half, though the second half was written well too, I just felt the start was a lot stronger.

Although I'm a canon-shipper, I didn't mind the AU aspect of this piece. I didn't mind that Cedric was alive or that he and Hermione were together. You made it seem natural. I like the way you portrayed Harry and Hermione's relationship, it very much reflected their relationship in the series, and that was nice. The only thing that really bothered me was how both Cedric and Harry kept calling her " 'Mione". I've never been a fan of that nickname, as she was never called 'Mione in the books and it just doesn't feel right to me, particularly coming from Harry. But of course that is just a personal preference.

It seems this challenge has been inspiring some really strong pieces of writing, and this piece was no exception.

Author's Response: AW Thank you so much for the wonderful review! It was amazing! :)

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